You crept silently into my dreams
Like a shadow unseen
You made a home in my heart
One which you would never see
You saw my last smile
Before it disappeared
How wonderfully cruel of you
To be so beautiful
Nicely done. I think if you included the title of your poem in the poem it would haunt the girl better. Possibly your first line could be your title then your 4th and finally 7th line could also be the title. My 2 cents
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the girl the nameless comes and awakes the inside sleeping eyes of love.........