Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Rookie - 207 Points (Singapore)

To Be Left Out In The Blue - Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

They came in numbers
In big figures

Drawing a long line
Like flocking to the shrine

I stood under the trees near the park
Looking and figured what went wrong with my luck

Why I wasn’t in the same line
Queue for so long but still feeling so fine

With their hands holding the cards
Cashing out new notes that’s so hard

Smells anew
Only a few

Like me who’re not in the queue
Would be left out in the blue

Cuz I don’t have the card
To make the cut

Comments about To Be Left Out In The Blue by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • (11/14/2008 10:35:00 AM)

    Quiet poems. It is beautifully written... 10...
    Kindest regards,
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  • (3/21/2008 4:32:00 PM)

    Your title is very expressive of the 'blue mood' of your poem. Excellent write.

    Warm regards,

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, September 18, 2009

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