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*** When We Fall Apart ***

Rating: 3.9
Krakatoa roars lava flows
Natives scattered to death
Grasses no longer need a mow
Leaving no lives and wealth

I’d float like a feather
Falls into your abyss of devotion,
Drowns in your pond of murmur
Plunging in slow motion
Like Krakatoa, you expel your lethal blow
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Okkar Pku 15 June 2009
Hi I could feel something from your poem.But I don't know definitely, something limitless, ineffable...
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Madison Yeater 01 January 2009
really good piece.... dreams dont always come true for everyone... but its what you can hold on to, its what you have, what you have gained that matters. 10+
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Naidz Ladia 13 December 2008
it ends with tears...maybe, u wrote ths one when ur still depressed thats why, every lines of the poems are realstic..whew....mmmmm mmmmm mm m mmmmmm mm mmmmmmmm mmmmm mm..means THIS IS REALLY GREAT HON..
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Naru Kaede 14 November 2008
Wowwwww... I just remember the song, 'Ocean apart, day after day...' You describe it so clear, love it's always complicated, , , Ohohoho, don't give up, apart by ocean or land is not a measure (?) of our faith... The Great One! ! Naru Kaede, ,
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Fading Heart 12 November 2008
I love titles that catch my eye and this was an eye catcher for sure for me :) loving it.
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Min Sia 10 November 2008
It keeps me thinking..that love is like a journey..and even a journey itself! ! ! I love it! ! Really...
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Carol Fletcher 17 October 2008
My heart has been so torn asunder when God took my Beloved, but your understanding of it helps to make it more tolerable! Thank you!
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 09 October 2008
Very true indeed! ...I fell in love with your poem.....10
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toruk macto 21 September 2008
This is a great poem. The words, the beautiful pictures... The last stanza is the best!
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Drishti Magoo 17 September 2008
nice poetry...specially the last stanza.
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