poet Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

* Send Me A Love *

The sound of running water
galvanizes the wound I endure
Since we met
No remedy could heal my injury
The key to my vital health
Is with you
Unlock my bereavement
With your little smile

Intrinsically, I secure
Intransigently, I adore
That sweet little smile
Am I an impudent?

My mind is implacable
My words could be heretical

Your sweet little smile
A mamba
How to revive me?

Send me a love
Inundate my conundrum
a biorhythm

I’m falling into a hosanna
Send me a love
Incinerate my Draconian concatenation
Canalize the river of longing
Your sweet little smile
Astounds my lurid heart

Send me a love

Poem Submitted: Monday, July 6, 2009
Poem Edited: Saturday, August 8, 2009

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Comments about * Send Me A Love * by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

  • Emma AdamyanEmma Adamyan (11/29/2009 11:07:00 PM)

    it can show an anguish that in ur heart lives... so sad poem. well written,10

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (10/10/2009 4:06:00 AM)

    Intransigently, I adore

    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Nooruddeen MmNooruddeen Mm (10/8/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    Excellent selections of the words
    Good work too.

    Tks
    Rgds
    Nooruddeen

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  • Agnes Parker (10/2/2009 8:36:00 AM)

    I get the feeling that your love is, as yet, unrequited. Oh - to have a muse - how it hurts, how it makes us pour forth our very souls.

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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (9/24/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    a wonderful passionated write, with a mysterious beautiful feeling.. I just do love your unique verses Suliman, , , , , , , , , , , ,

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (9/20/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    Intrinsically, I secure
    Intransigently, I adore


    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire (8/15/2009 6:39:00 AM)

    Wow! Excellent style and carefully chosen words make this selection of words memorable. you'll be remembered through your writing one day when you're gone, something I wish for myself one day.

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  • Appleblossoms 2009 (8/7/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    I just read this again...and feel very uncomfortable about the word 'manure'....is there anything you could do to revise this line?

    Rgds,

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  • Rafique Farooqi (8/6/2009 3:17:00 PM)

    it is a top job Suiliman.. well done

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  • Miran Mohammed (7/28/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    uh well, i cant say its good...actually its......amazing! fantastic!

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/26/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    From: Rachel Ann Butler (Bury St Edmunds Ireland; Female; 89)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 7/26/2009 7: 52: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: Send me a Love


    Now this is more my kind of work I enjoy..you are talented and have great pnmanship...

    I will read it again...

    I voted 10 on the page.

    Best

    RAB

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/24/2009 8:28:00 AM)

    From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;)
    To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
    Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 16: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: RE: Send Me A Love


    Your poems have always been sweet and touching. And so is this.

    Best,
    Ulveena Aitzaz

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  • Black & White Right (7/20/2009 4:47:00 PM)

    ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Iman Djalloul (7/20/2009 4:50:00 AM)

    The more I read, the wider my smile became. Beautifully written. I loved it.
    I wish my love would write me something like this! *sigh*

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  • Dorcas J Kimosop (7/17/2009 7:29:00 AM)

    that is so lovely........

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  • Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen (7/17/2009 4:08:00 AM)

    lovely, ....sends you a love!

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  • Candace Johnson (7/16/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    beautiful....moving..... passionate

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  • Rafique Farooqi (7/14/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    very beautiful poem.......

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  • The Dreamer (7/13/2009 5:42:00 PM)

    very nice - thank you for sharing

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  • Broken Heart (7/12/2009 1:14:00 PM)

    vry nice! ! i reeaally reallly liked it! !

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