The sound of running water
galvanizes the wound I endure
Since we met
No remedy could heal my injury
The key to my vital health
Is with you
Unlock my bereavement
With your little smile
Intrinsically, I secure
Intransigently, I adore
That sweet little smile
Am I an impudent?
My mind is implacable
My words could be heretical
Your sweet little smile
A mamba
How to revive me?
Send me a love
Inundate my conundrum
a biorhythm
I’m falling into a hosanna
Send me a love
Incinerate my Draconian concatenation
Canalize the river of longing
Your sweet little smile
Astounds my lurid heart
Send me a love
The more I read, the wider my smile became. Beautifully written. I loved it. I wish my love would write me something like this! *sigh*
From: Ulveena Aitzaz (Pakistan ;) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/24/2009 6: 16: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: RE: Send Me A Love Your poems have always been sweet and touching. And so is this. Best, Ulveena Aitzaz
From: Rachel Ann Butler (Bury St Edmunds Ireland; Female; 89) To: Sulaiman Mohd Yusof Date Time: 7/26/2009 7: 52: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Send me a Love Now this is more my kind of work I enjoy..you are talented and have great pnmanship... I will read it again... I voted 10 on the page. Best RAB
it can show an anguish that in ur heart lives... so sad poem. well written,10
Excellent selections of the words Good work too. Tks Rgds Nooruddeen
I get the feeling that your love is, as yet, unrequited. Oh - to have a muse - how it hurts, how it makes us pour forth our very souls.
a wonderful passionated write, with a mysterious beautiful feeling.. I just do love your unique verses Suliman, , , , , , , , , , , ,
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
that is so lovely........