Best Poems: 494 / 500


Rating: 4.8

Flashing rays
Thunderous sound
Fire encases melting heat
Shrapnel ignominiously
Dance through innocent flesh
That crawls out of one’s skin
The roar of the explosion
Dries every tear
Screams pollute, deafening ears
Live audience
In an unprecedented
Death Opera

The sound of fury
Orchestrated by an unseen martyr
Believed to be
Next of kin
Of the Devil
Foe of God

Saeid Hadavand 23 October 2009

Perfect & fantastic, like always my friend.

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Lily Law 25 September 2009

I feel the terror as if I'm there to witness it... The words and emotions just keep on flowing in nicely... ^-^

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Kuji Soliman 07 September 2009

extreemly powerfull words, put together in a poem! this is lovely and very enjoyable to read! thanks for sharing

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Bill Gough 01 September 2009

Very Powerful. What I like about this poem, amongst a number of other aspects, is the compression. So much, in so few lines, means the poem enfolds itself into itself. Because there are so many omitted details, the mind provides its own, and that allows time and space to fold itself upon itself. The effect, in my opinion, is to create a sort of implosion rather than the usual outward motion that one would expect.

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Kaarem Perawiti 27 August 2009

like the way u express a storm, intristing..keep it up

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Amy walker 05 April 2019

A beautiful poem

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Terror foe of God having no religion.Thanks for sharing.

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Diana Ferrer 19 January 2010

very nice, i like your use of words.

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Deepta Protik Osman 02 January 2010

I will say good like others

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Kaycie Cooper 30 December 2009

Truly beautiful :) Bravo 10!

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