To Me You Are The Sunlight Comments

AMAZINGLY LINES ANDREW Take care Love duncan X To me you are the moonlight That does rest upon the lake, So softly through the darkness there Until the dawn does break, When once more you will rise again And colour you shall bring, For when you shine across the land The birds for love shall sing.

An excellent piece of poetry worthy of a 10. It encaptured me from the very first line to the last. Excellent. Regards, Craig.

Splendid write Andrew. The flow is delicious and the words also. this is a great poem and has excellence written all the way through it. Applause from me and a few curtains calls too. Loved it., love and hugs Ernestine XXX