I hardly know you
but i've seen you for a lifetime
in my lucid dreams,
in my wide awakes and
deep into my sleeping states
you've grown on me
like ivy
like mushrooms
because it always rains on me
and you can be like home
coming and going
always around
but never
truly mine
I can't hold you for long
I will not hear you anymore
at some point
I will dive deep into you
and hear you only from the inside
like you hear yourself, with the same voice
for the same ears
from the same heart.
but i've seen you for a lifetime in my lucid dreams, in my wide awakes and deep into my sleeping states you've grown on me..........I will dive deep into you to hear you from your inside. very fine poem on love.... very imaginative and creative you are. thank you dear poetess. tony
Thank you Shannon! It was really spontaneous and only after your comment I read it again and again and realised what I wrote. Human mind is beautiful
you've grown on me like ivy like mushrooms because it always rains on me and you can be like home.. very original inthoughts and expressions. tha nk u. tony
I hardly know you but i've seen you for a lifetime... Truly a heartfelt poem...full of emotions... you would also visit my Raindrops keeps on Falling thank you, Ann...perfect 10! Cheryl
Sometimes we just know..... people, places, previous spirit souls....sometimes situations are not mean't to be in this lifetime...yet, destined for the right time. You're very talented Ann.
What an effective portrayal of the desire to really KNOW someone! Hearing from the inside is really the deepest level of love, one that we all hope to achieve someday. Yet again, you have somehow put universal feelings into words.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A powerful message of love. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Thank you, Jazib