To Soar In Sky Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

To Soar In Sky

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When you reminded me of "broken wings"
I lost beautiful ground and failed to sing
It was severe blow to my own kingdom
I have witnessed such beautiful creature seldom

You wished to soar in the sky
I heard it and felt very shy
As you were found still in same zeal
The world seemed to you not artificial but real

You were perfect soul mate
Never thought of self to narrate
What all had bothered you?
How much plight you had undergone through?

You had wished only world
Lovely and beautiful to remain in fold
Some magician came and shattered
Whole of your life was altered

You were sky bound and crashed
Wings were crippled and dashed
To strike on ground and never to regain
Your whole story is full of pain

You have still elegance of queen
As beautiful as never have been
Who can kill your inner spirit?
You are, even today, healthy and fit

I shall grow when you blow
With gentle wind and with river's flow
There is much more to enjoy than to loose
You are super as always but one has to choose

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2012

Jen Walls Hasmukh, your To Soar In Sky is so deeply tender and spiritually affectionate to the soul...I feel the depth of this write and I so love I shall grow when you blow with gentle wind and with river's flow... You are certainly a tender heart to achieve this lovely write. Thanks!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

last line say it all Tom Kennedy11 hours ago I enjoy your honest writings....Hasmukh Your poet friend, Tom Kennedy Comment +1 It goood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Your poet friend, Tom Kennedy Comment +1 It goood

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Rahima YAsin12 hours ago Its different! ! Comment +1 a poem of choice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 September 2012

Alan Green 'Guppyman'12 hours ago the poet says it is one or the other

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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