To the Desert Comments

I just came across this great poem. Loved its construction and fabric. The marvellous poem has a soul of its own. When you conclude with "I will be the water for your thirst", it sums up all. Top score and myfav

Que belleza! Que pasión! ¡Mas que un poema, Emoción! Me encanto'!

I am bread. I will be the water for your thirst.- just heart rending line; great poem for the wasteful world;

Benjamin Alire Sáenz! Beautiful poem....!

Benjamin Alire Sáenz! Beautiful poem.

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in good diction. Thanks for sharing Benjamin.

You blow a breeze and brand Your breath into my mouth. You reach—then bend Your force, to break, blow, burn, and make me new. a great poem with mysterious notes. i deduce it and say it is God who is quenching your thirst. am i right dear poet. thank u. tony