Toiling Under Sun Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Toiling Under Sun

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Toiling under sun
Tuesday,30th October 2018

I will create the scene
that shall not have been seen
to rouse the feeling of the depressed
who have never accessed

With their toiling hard
and expectation of no good word
they shall raise the voice with the sword
in the name of the lord

the sentiments shall rise
and surprise all
who have suppressed so far
and pushed them away and far

What shall my ink pour?
to remove their sourness
and bring sweetness
for the toiling classes

I shall not wonder
if they create no terror
yet bring in the revolution
for the upliftment with the solution

Hasmukh Mehta

Toiling Under Sun
Tuesday, October 30, 2018
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2018

I shall not wonder if they create no terror yet bring in the revolution for the upliftment with the solution Hasmukh Mehta

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2018

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 October 2018

Hasmukh, such a powerful poem..................

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Dave Walker 30 October 2018

The voice of reason will rise, and the people of the depressed will rise with it. Great poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2018

Timothy PaytonTimothy and 15 others are consistently creating meaningful discussions with their posts. Thank you very much for this & nice one! ! ! 1 Manage Like · Reply · 10m

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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