Tongues Of Fire Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Tongues Of Fire Tanka

Rating: 5.0


startled pigeons
fill the sunset sky...
thoughts of her
darting across my mind
like tongues of fire

Wednesday, February 1, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,relationship,sunset
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lantz Pierre 01 February 2017

This is exceptional in it's perceptually exquisite exactitude. The life of the exterior world in a particular flashing moment of time mirrored and reflected in the precise evocation of the interior thoughts. Masterful.

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