Too Many Gifted Drift On 'Ifs' Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Too Many Gifted Drift On 'Ifs'



Too many gifted drift on 'ifs'.
Unsatisfied with a life that's missed.
And this is what is reminisced...
When giving up on rhythm and reason!
To stay stuck in ruts they choose to live in.

Too many want to give up just lip.
Sitting to dwell in aging sentiments.
To waste every second someone gives them.
And puffing hot air about nothing!

A swift kick in the rear will motivate.
Rotating stale debates don't renovate.
Procrastinators hesitate in waste.
Initiating simulated movement faked.

Eliminating anything that takes...
Removal of excuses that create headaches.
With a towing of their moans they own!

Too many gifted drift on 'ifs'.
Unsatisfied with a life that's missed.
And this is what is reminisced...
When giving up on rhythm and reason!
To stay stuck in ruts they choose to live in.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 02 October 2009

a good swift kick usually gets attention

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