Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Too Many Rivers To Cross Comments

Rating: 5.0

I woke up this morning and realized there are just too many rivers to cross.
There are rivers of sadness, rivers of pain, rivers of tears, and rivers yet to cross.
Sweetheart when we were young all the rivers were ahead of us, always in the distance.
Our love created a family and created a river of happiness, and our love made us one even in sadness.
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John Walters
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Chinedu Dike 08 March 2016

Beautiful memorial to a loved one who had embarked on a glorious journey into eternity. An insightful depiction of the spiritual nature of love, and its voyage of bliss, well articulated and subtly penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing John. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Ryson Dsouza 18 February 2016

I Just can visualize the journey across the river.. A venture an experience.. A Perfect dedication in your writing.. Thanks for sharing..

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 February 2016

Fantastic flavor of eternal love evident in a glowing tribute paid to the beloved who had departed for the heavenly abode. Thanks for sharing.10++ points.

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Souren Mondal 17 February 2016

Such a beautiful poem John.. Loved it.. Thank you for sharing - :)

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