Too Much Darkness Poem by Cynthia Buhain-baello

Too Much Darkness



Too much of darkness lace the poem,
Loss and confusion drain the lines.
Reading it seems Defeat has come
Upon me as I searched for what it defines.

Man is spirit, body and soul.
To deny this truth is but utter loss,
A pained groping for what makes us whole,
A curse found in a life without cause.

Too much darkness cannot make the eyes see
It succumbs the mind to blind desperation.
Inner conflict, doubts, uncertainty
Mark the poet who dwells in oblivion.

Cynthia Buhain-Baello~~~01.27.18

Too Much Darkness
Saturday, January 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,darkness,defeat
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The mind is like a memory bank. What we put into it later becomes our thoughts, our actions, and eventually our life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 January 2018

Stupendous poem. A poignant write well executed. The flow and wording are just fantastic. I totally agree with the poet's note that the mind is like a memory bank.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 January 2018

Such a brilliant well-penned poem po👍👍👍

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 27 January 2018

Thank you again Bernard F. Asuncion

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Cynthia Buhain-baello

Cynthia Buhain-baello

Manila, Philippines
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