Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 714,263 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Total Evolution - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Total evolution

What is there to feel good?
When meaning of real lfie ism not understood?
When our poor peasants live half clad?
Their stomachs are empty and look half dead

It is good to present in profession
But equally good to make effort for humanization
There is equal joy for participation
In social work and for their elevation

Is that more important?
When you country is reeling under drought at present
People have no water to drink?
They walk miles away and here we boost self with ink!

It is good to look beautiful
But equally good if that looks human
Delivers some message for masses
Without giving any classes

Humanity shall survive
If we revive
Work for total evolution
The only it will be called revolution

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/6/2016 2:01:00 AM)

    No words to express Sir... Tfs..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/6/2016 2:00:00 AM)

    Humanity shall survive
    If we revive
    Work for total evolution
    The only it will be called revolution
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 6, 2016



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