Touch-Me-Not Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Touch-Me-Not

Rating: 5.0


With a tender touch
I did feel a Touch-me-not
That folded up, ouch!
Perhaps the touch that I thought
Tender was, was not.
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Senryu | 27.01.2019 |

Monday, June 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: green,nature,touch
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 24 June 2019

This is a beautiful Senryu with nice theme, . Interesting inscription. Thanks for sharing sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul for reading and commenting.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 June 2019

Sir, this is a very delicate Senryu with tender expression! Appreciated the concept.......................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 June 2019

You too have a delicate sense of appreciation, Dr Swain, thank you so much.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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