Traces Poem by Smoky Hoss

Traces

Rating: 3.8


Walking down the road
looking for a purpose;
wondering why so much of life
can come and hurt us -
Crossed the dam
over the flowing river,
saw all those cracks
it made me shiver -
Sometimes it gets hard to see
the traces,
here and there, now and then
found in passing faces -
There's nothing greater
through all the difficult miles,
than to look into the eyes of a sweet child
and see hope, undefiled -
We all get old
and worn out,
but there really is a Way
to find what this is all about -
So let that forlorn tear
run down your wrinkled old cheek,
and never forget earth and heaven belong
to the small, the lonely and the meek -

Sunday, June 25, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hope,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 08 July 2017

This is yet another great writing and observation turned into a poem, and oh how true.... look into the eyes of a sweet child and see hope...I truly hope and pray that your last lines are really true......Great synopsis and thinking.....and....great poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Lawerence Mize 02 July 2017

Well stated Smoky. Uplifting as always.

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Rini Shibu 25 June 2017

Never forget earth and heaven belong to the small Lonely and meek...nice++10

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