Saturday, February 9, 2008

Tranquility Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gentle breeze wafts across the lake
As I relax beside the fire
My thoughts abate to non awareness
And I am engulfed in tranquility
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C R Clark
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C. P. Sharma 22 July 2009

Richard, Perfect expression of blissful tranquility. You can feel this tranquility between the gap of the two breaths if u concentrate on them. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 03 September 2008

Reading, I too can feel here your tranquility, Richard...a neat four liner 10

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Mary Gordley 10 February 2008

Please consider it shared. Thank you.

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... Lynch 09 February 2008

A perfect moment, great write. -Kylie M. Lynch

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C R Clark

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