Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Transparency Comments

Rating: 5.0

Giggling sheets of transparency
Sliding down airs of marble guesses
Greeting the well beneath with chimes of
Liquid laughs and candy caresses...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Elena Sandu 29 May 2012

I am frustrated for not having any talent with a brush. I feel some kind of pressure to keep dreaming and painting the stunning imagery of your poetry. I may do it inside, your words are printed in transparent colours on my soul's tabloid. Thank you! Oh, and the frustration goes double because I tried several times to give the tens but seems that my click tries to push in vain... I am limited only to thanks, so maybe I shall send them in a great amount. Please take as much as you can carry. Millions thanks!

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Ramesh Rai 25 May 2012

a nice transparency in this poem. through this poem I can see vividly your angelical face. nice compose. nice emotion and thoughts. regards.

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