Aria Siren

Transparent - Poem by Aria Siren

these thoughts tear me apart and consume me
the skin i pretended was thick
is really transparent
and naked I sit
and all along you've seen right through me

Comments about Transparent by Aria Siren

  • (9/15/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    fav. line: and all along you've seen right through me. Such a defeated, vulnerable feeling that seems to creep up on you at the worst times and often adds insult to injury. Short and powerful. (Report) Reply

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  • Tiger Lily Love (8/20/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    Sometimes its the shortest poems that are the sweetest or in this case, the deepest, and that stay with you the longest. Very chilling and inspired write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 10, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 10, 2012

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