Tread softly with my heart tonight,
a gentle step with caution take.
Walk gently through my troubled dreams
lest careless word my heart would break.
Forgive with boundless openness
the crushing failure of despair.
An empty soul with naught contained
finds only sorrow hiding there.
Awake within a lovelorn heart
a warmth to kindle seasoned wood.
From smouldering embers reach within
and see a love no one else could
Tread softly now, my precious one,
For in your hands you hold my heart,
I gift it you, and hold my faith,
to hope 'gainst hope, we never part.
I JUST CAN'T comment as I know u not yet ONCE you have read my MOM'S SMILES poem and posted a comment then I will come and read this one again.. till then please ABIDE WITH ME 10pLUS++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ still I GIVE MORE PH will
wonderful, excellent, beautiful and awesome love poem. Enjoyed from beginning to end. 'Awake within a lovelorn heart a warmth to kindle seasoned wood. From smouldering embers reach within and see a love no one else could...' is beautiful...10+++++
I am so humbled by your very generous words. Thank you so much Anil..This poem was one that I felt a real connection with when writing it and it remains quite special for me -so if anyone reading it, enjoys it, then that makes me particularly happy. Lodigiana x
I really appreciate your kind comments Robert - thank you Lodigiana
Thank you so much..particularly as this is one of my personal favourites Lodigiana
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thankx 4 ur visit to moms smiles another one u may like is MOTHERS DAY TODAY you have a broad and sentimental heart your poetry by itself is a piece of art like you we all must also start U MAY ALSO LIKE TO READ SIMILAR AS URS LEAD KINDLY INTO THE NIGHT