Tread Softly Poem by Lodigiana Poetess

Tread Softly

Rating: 5.0


Tread softly with my heart tonight,
a gentle step with caution take.
Walk gently through my troubled dreams
lest careless word my heart would break.

Forgive with boundless openness
the crushing failure of despair.
An empty soul with naught contained
finds only sorrow hiding there.

Awake within a lovelorn heart
a warmth to kindle seasoned wood.
From smouldering embers reach within
and see a love no one else could

Tread softly now, my precious one,
For in your hands you hold my heart,
I gift it you, and hold my faith,
to hope 'gainst hope, we never part.

Tread Softly
Tuesday, July 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: failure,faith,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The fragility of love is never to be undermined
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2018

Thankx 4 ur visit to moms smiles another one u may like is MOTHERS DAY TODAY you have a broad and sentimental heart your poetry by itself is a piece of art like you we all must also start U MAY ALSO LIKE TO READ SIMILAR AS URS LEAD KINDLY INTO THE NIGHT

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 25 July 2018

I JUST CAN'T comment as I know u not yet ONCE you have read my MOM'S SMILES poem and posted a comment then I will come and read this one again.. till then please ABIDE WITH ME 10pLUS++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ still I GIVE MORE PH will

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 July 2018

wonderful, excellent, beautiful and awesome love poem. Enjoyed from beginning to end. 'Awake within a lovelorn heart a warmth to kindle seasoned wood. From smouldering embers reach within and see a love no one else could...' is beautiful...10+++++

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Lodigiana Poetess 19 July 2018

I am so humbled by your very generous words. Thank you so much Anil..This poem was one that I felt a real connection with when writing it and it remains quite special for me -so if anyone reading it, enjoys it, then that makes me particularly happy. Lodigiana x

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Robert Murray Smith 17 July 2018

A beautifully crafted write.++10- - - - -

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Lodigiana Poetess 18 July 2018

I really appreciate your kind comments Robert - thank you Lodigiana

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Chris Embrick 17 July 2018

Brilliant, beautiful, and touchingly sincere. 10 Loving it.

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Lodigiana Poetess 18 July 2018

Thank you so much..particularly as this is one of my personal favourites Lodigiana

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