Treasure Poem by M.J. Lemon

Treasure

Rating: 4.3


Look, emerald shoots
These are the treasures of Spring
This land will be paved.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 16 August 2019

With spring, green shoots will appear! Though they are the treasures of nature, when the land is paved with brick or stones, they will be destroyed! I think you are concerned about it..........or are you happy that the land will be covered in green shoots with the arrival if spring? A beautiful haiku!

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Mj Lemon 16 August 2019

Thank you so much, Valsa. And yes, I'm happy the green shoots will reappear.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 May 2018

Where there are flowers I see a pavement to arrive so close to the colors and aroma. A beautiful poem!

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Mj Lemon 18 May 2018

Akhtar, thank you so very, very much.

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Bri Edwards 28 April 2017

and the lawnmowers shall cause neighbors to slam their windows shut! bri :)

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Mj Lemon 29 April 2017

Awesome! Your comment is just one syllable short of being a human haiku....that would make it a perfect companion piece....

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Terry Craddock 05 February 2017

Beautiful 'emerald shoots' treasured or discrded, paved in crops or stone? nice lines

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Mj Lemon 06 February 2017

Thank you so much, Terry.

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E.j. Langley 10 December 2015

I like this. The strong and contemporary message in three simple lines has a grace that would be clouded by too many words. (ie, this review) . It inspires me to explore the Haiku.

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Mj Lemon 14 December 2015

Thank you so much, E.J. I am really looking forward to your haiku.

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