True Feelings Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

True Feelings

Rating: 5.0


'The skies outside is getting dark
as dusk turns to gloomy night
there was no lightning nor some sparks
only the dreary street lights

while everyone was watching TV
she silently turns to me
and I immediately recognized
true sadness in her eyes

as the heavy rain starts to fall
we understood it all
the feelings we already had
will never happen and it's so sad.'

Wednesday, February 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: skies,sadness,rain,feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 February 2021

A sad poem of love. The dark sky and the rain contributes to the deep sadness between the lovers. Beautifully written.

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MADRE KAKAO 12 February 2021

this emotion😭

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 February 2021

Very sad words in the poem, they love each other, why it will never happen? Since it will never happen, of course it makes that so sad. The poem only informs the reader about that.. That's all. and yet it is lovely worded.

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 11 February 2021

thank you Ms Sylvia for a very wonderful comment.Really appreciate this a lot.

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