Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Trust Or Lust - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Trust or lust
The question is who starts first
And sincerely lasts
It is between pride and shyness
That really stops us

One is always afraid
When conditions are laid
Some strings are attached
The break point is reached

The feeling is same
But where from it came?
You mean 'mistrust”?
Or sex and lust

Some understanding has to be reached
Not on all occasions, it has to be preached
Love is something like 'give and take'
When, in fact, it is not fake

Love more
And explore
Meeting point in general
The relation then turns into real

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Comments about Trust Or Lust by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/3/2015 10:46:00 PM)


    welcome Kanusing Solanki
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  • Shakil Ahmed (12/3/2015 3:29:00 AM)


    Love is something like 'give and take'
    When, in fact, it is not fake- -

    yes, love is something give and take, one sided love doesn't stand the taste of time, nice work, thanks
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/3/2015 3:01:00 AM)


    welcome Scott Ransopher likes this. Unlike · Reply · 1 ·
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/3/2015 3:01:00 AM)


    Persian Khushi Thank you Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 hr
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/3/2015 2:55:00 AM)


    Love more
    And explore
    Meeting point in general
    The relation then turns into real
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 3, 2015



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