Try Poem by Glennish Gemperoa

Try



started as nothing i was
thought of trying
i wanted to do it by myself
never thought I'd need someone


i tried to fly as high as i could
but i only tried
nothing i lost, nothing i earned
until you came, gave me wings then taught me how to fly
in my side you stayed and never left

i reached the unreachable
over the mountain and skies, together we flew
thank you i say
Yet blank is my mind on how to repay you.

-dedicated to my parents and all the parents in the world-
By: Glennish M. Gemperoa 13 yrs. old in Cebu City Philippines.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

This is a very sweet poem. I'm sure many children feel this way, and you have found a way to express that :) Well done!

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Manonton Dalan 27 December 2008

very nice poem. keep on writing. if possible try writing poems about nature. thanks.md

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 December 2008

You've done well.Thank you for this nice piece of poetry.Do write more to teach us all as well. Edward Kofi Louis.

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