Turn Baneficial Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Turn Baneficial

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People are ready to grab
Any opportunity to stab
One can make himself fool
As others are ready to be successful

It comes handy in their hand
As cunning man may try to open up as friend
He may keep watch like devil's eye
You may never succeed with countless tries

Some people are called cheaters
In the guise of gentlemen they greet
Take into confidence and disclose some scheme
This is sufficient to fall in their game

People too fall in their design
As it is considered apparent weakness sign
To put a blind trust is like suicide
It is advised not easily to confide

Legend says “where there are greedy persons”
There will be every chance to be cheated with many reasons
Intelligent person may try to lure in many ways
Little intelligent may fall for easy prey

It is better to keep self in ready position
Try to be cooperative but with limited relation
It is good to be little conservative too
As some of the thing may turn beneficially true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice Shaun JonesLess than a minute ago A beautiful rendition of common sense. Comment +1 WELL, WELL, WELL, VERY GOOD Darlene Dai'Re3 minutes ago I LIKE IT Comment +1 I like it!

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Ma. Allysa Antonette Ranche3 minutes ago It is vividly translate. I like it! Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago no translation of anything.. original dear. welcome

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Da Breezy Wun BrewHaLess than a minute ago not bad, but could be better, the rhymes in the poem just dont flow like they should. you did have a good example of rhyme in the lines: To put a blind trust is like suicide It is advised not easily to confide but also, you should try and correctly punctuate your poetry to let people get the intended flow of the writing

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People are ready to grab Any opportunity to stab One can make himself fool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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