Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 686,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Turn For Good - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The gathering turns out to be great show
The ladies put on jeweler and glow
The show is perfect and impression is made
The host is happy to have boosted enough about trade

Here takes place unruly scene too
Many relatives try for points to prove
Many patch up differences
Ask for apology and behave well at once

This is the only place where everybody attends
The wedding cards with lavish appearance are sent
This is the occasion where everybody remains present
The occasion is graced and no one remains absent

Even thought it is more on grand show off
The family tradition has been made last laugh
You can see great many changes with no participation
It is just gathering with no love and affection

I hope it may turn for good in future
We need to develop mixing nature
A place for meeting old people
Elders, sisters and newly wed couples


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/28/2014 11:56:00 PM)

    : Turn for good (Score: 1)
    by manofyhwh on Saturday, March 01,2014 (00: 18: 20)
    It is rare that I comment on something I've read, although I read a lot. Something compelled me to let you knwo that you have hit the nail right on the head. Very Happy
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:13:00 PM)

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    20 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply

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    Love the flow of this. Tfs :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:12:00 PM)

    Alex Taranto
    xLove the flow of this. Tfs :)
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:12:00 PM)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:08:00 PM)

    True


    Gabriela Passmore15 minutes ago
    That's exactly what a wedding is like.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:07:00 PM)

    Spelling errors make it difficult to read.


    Debi Bartley14 minutes ago
    No flow.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    please mention too so i correct it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/27/2014 9:03:00 PM)

    The gathering turns out to be great show
    The ladies put on jeweler and glow
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 27, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 7, 2014


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