Turn For Good Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Turn For Good

Rating: 5.0


The gathering turns out to be great show
The ladies put on jeweler and glow
The show is perfect and impression is made
The host is happy to have boosted enough about trade

Here takes place unruly scene too
Many relatives try for points to prove
Many patch up differences
Ask for apology and behave well at once

This is the only place where everybody attends
The wedding cards with lavish appearance are sent
This is the occasion where everybody remains present
The occasion is graced and no one remains absent

Even thought it is more on grand show off
The family tradition has been made last laugh
You can see great many changes with no participation
It is just gathering with no love and affection

I hope it may turn for good in future
We need to develop mixing nature
A place for meeting old people
Elders, sisters and newly wed couples

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

The gathering turns out to be great show The ladies put on jeweler and glow

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

Spelling errors make it difficult to read. Debi Bartley14 minutes ago No flow. Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago please mention too so i correct it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2014

: Turn for good (Score: 1) by manofyhwh on Saturday, March 01,2014 (00: 18: 20) It is rare that I comment on something I've read, although I read a lot. Something compelled me to let you knwo that you have hit the nail right on the head. Very Happy

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

xLike 20 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply Alex Taranto Love the flow of this. Tfs :) 19 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

Alex Taranto xLove the flow of this. Tfs :) 19 minutes ago by Alex Taranto | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

Ginger Blue xLike 18 minutes ago by Ginger Blue | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2014

True Gabriela Passmore15 minutes ago That's exactly what a wedding is like. Comment 0

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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