Two Comments- - Read- - - Note....Beeeelow Poem by me poet yeps poet

Two Comments- - Read- - - Note....Beeeelow



Member: Varsha M
Comment:

let the Virus bells chime
then upon it will vaccines climb.....

''beautiful metaphorical expression.''

******Let them all ring
Filling atmosphere with hymn
Reverberating within soul like
cream
Until blooms
the full song.

Oh I remember a flavor of
butterscotch
Melting
on my tongue
Like soul mingling with spirit
Phlegm that rules
the nation with a notch.****



Poem: 59298050 - The night is no more - - Young
Member: Varsha M
Comment: Blackmailer always blackmails be it this or dat....




Poem: 59298050 - Thenightisnomore - - Young
Member: Mahtab Bangalee

Comment:
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But with
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Yard of poems> > > > > > > > > > > > > > > >)))))))))

Friday, October 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art,poet,poetess,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
ONE says add on- -lantern of GREENgirls - -
let em -be like .....flowers_+++__- === ''PHOOLS''

The other says

let the guy not
be-fool
and
now what say you
my silent readers
on whom depends my future
now 481/500
gang busters

who the ''flower who thefool''
shall upon me PPME
RULE
and keep me icy creamy cool
oldie no!
LOL

Thanks my
poetree
friends
twins are you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 02 October 2020

twins.... you can do anything.

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