Two Hearts Spent Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Two Hearts Spent

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A lifetime’s
relationship
still lies
where it was tossed,
like an old tattered rag,
in the corner of the room.
unnoticed; unattended.

The “ successful couple”
on a road too long,
with too much sacrifice;
time they both stole
from two young hearts
that promised
to be in love forever.

Bought it all, have it all,
living the “good life”;
still together
as ‘man and wife’.
Hiding empty hearts
they weather the loneliness,
and neither one of them
understands why.

Sunday, June 15, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 28 September 2008

stealing hearts, telling lies. What else is there to life? You are honest to a fault, Brunelle. I like how you see - perceive - things. Goldy

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