Two In One (Tanka) Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Two In One (Tanka)



Watching a movie
At night while I´m writing
You say to sleep
Nodding head I continued
You changed the channel and night

Saturday, May 7, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: contrast,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 08 May 2016

:) not bad.. not bad at all, my friend!

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thanks dear Fab, Really, you are behind that..

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