Two-Part Poem by Zyw Zywa

Two-Part



When he cried, I listened
I looked at him without

saying anything, I don't know what
time it was, whether it was busy

in the street, in what kind of room
we were, I didn't look or listen

past him, his words were
low and slow, like a bass

in my silence
and later

my questions sang
as a cello, along

with his story and my feelings
accompanied his grief

That's how we walked through the pain together
Nothing else

Thursday, November 15, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Collection "Without reserve"
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 30 November 2018

The insertion of the instruments, bass and cello, painted a picture of sadness shared between two hearts. I LOVED that beautifully crafted image. Terrific writing!

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