Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 698,251 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Ultimate Course - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Ultimate course...

Nothing more or
Nothing less
The smile should be on face
In all the cases

Let life be understood
Like essential food
It shall always teach
And help us to reach

Now may start holy month
Providing fresh breathe
In the direction of goal
With response o divinity call

Let day and night
Go alright
Showing us the basic principles
“Survive with struggle”

Life shall provide
And decide
What shall be ultimate course?
With joy or pain, of course

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 9:11:00 PM)

    welcome................Têssý Æñglë, Dalvir Singh Gahlawat, Megha Shukla
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 9:11:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta.............welcome kaveri yadav, manish doshi, malik zafar n scott ransopher
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2015 9:50:00 PM)

    Naidz Ladia Hasmukh Mehta...thanks for ur poem comment oldy
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2015 11:46:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Josefavictoria Padillo like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 1 min
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2015 11:46:00 AM)

    Naidz Ladia Nicely done oldy Unlike · Reply · 1 · 3 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2015 11:45:00 AM)

    Ultimate course...

    Nothing more or
    Nothing less
    The smile should be on face
    In all the cases
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 16, 2015



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