Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 698,251 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Ultimate Masters - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

The moment poem is out of poet’s hand
It travels faster than anticipated at the end
It gives lasting impression about what is conveyed
It is different thing whether liked or dismayed

Readers are ultimate master
It provokes their master faster
Like or dislike is conveyed in no time
Now poet has time to rethink in sufficient time

We proved time and again
That we are after physical gain
Whether it is good write or bad
It creates less impact after having read

Who is responsible for this great change?
Often we write on subject with out of age
Mostly on moral values beyond digestion
Such irrelevancy creates no cementing relation

If one thinks of creating some kind of awareness
He must have same smile as inwardly as outside on face
It must reflect what is practiced in real life and exposed
The life suggested must be near to reality and not look as if forced


Comments about Ultimate Masters by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2013 2:01:00 AM)

    Dear Sir, You are the ultimate master of inspiring readers between the choice of right and wrong. With kind regards,


    Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela
    Dec 02,2013


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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (11/29/2013 1:58:00 AM)

    Readers are ultimate masters. Poet creates and provides the thoughts. Nice poem. Thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/28/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    The moment poem is out of poet’s hand
    It travels faster than anticipated at the end
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, November 29, 2013


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