David Sabo

Rookie (December 2nd,1990 / Oklahoma City)

Umbrella - Poem by David Sabo

Let me tell you right
Let me tell you now
everything in sight
will come crashing down

I aint playing around
I anit waiting around
I am moving out
onto higher ground

Sunshine turns to stormy weather
so you better grab an umbrella
its gonna get worse before it gets better
im telling you now

I been here before
i know how this ends
you walk out that door
we aint gonna be friends again

Sunshine turn to stormy weather
so you better get an umbrella
its gonna get worse before it gets better
im feeling hella rain like cold vendetta

Im so unstable
i aint even able
to communicate to yall
the way i feel at all.

the sky is falling down
the water rising now
and i cannot find
a way out


Comments about Umbrella by David Sabo

  • (12/21/2009 6:35:00 PM)


    i know these feelings,
    anger
    doubt,
    self esteem crushed in all its ways.
    its just terrible
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  • (12/21/2009 3:46:00 PM)


    Lots of pent anger behind the words (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 3:31:00 PM)


    Love it! U express your thoughts and feelings so well, Marie x (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 2:18:00 PM)


    wow amazing. It described how I feel perfectly especially the last paragraph.
    Keep it up.
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  • (12/21/2009 2:01:00 PM)


    I like this one, i just love umbrellas. Lol (: (Report) Reply

  • (12/21/2009 11:20:00 AM)


    i like the rhyming and the picture it paints along with the story it tells! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 21, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, July 29, 2011


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