Unacceptable Fate Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Unacceptable Fate
I am unable to control
And respond to the natural call
It is fire inside against divisive forces
That is out to destroy the defense
I am raging against such people
Who are against our past struggle
That granted us the liberty and freedom
Such honor was witnessed seldom
People are today free to express
Bring happiness on face
Show to world that they are real
And really should enjoy the pulse or feel
The whole democratic system is hijacked
Where large interest is at stake
How come we sacrifice national interest?
Which is not considered as best?
Any like minded people should object?
Such defeatist thought in mind should be rejected
We must shape new and stable state
If that fails in reality then it will be unacceptable fate
Nice idea Caleb Turner7 minutes ago Someone sees what's going on
nice reign everlasting9 minutes ago I like your poems Comment +1
good one Ouranos Frey7 minutes ago well written, and understandable please check my poem *TRUE DARKNESS NEVER DIES* Comment +1
TS Brownstones powerful 4 minutes ago by TS Brownstones | Reply
Agreed Yousuf Faroqi8 minutes ago I agree with you Mr.Mehta, we take what we have for granted. I think because we are so busy with our lives, we neglect the wrong that happens in our society. And yes, if this continues then it will be an unacceptable fate. Am I thinking alongside you? Or have I the wrong idea of the poem? Comment +1
Strong views on liberty and freedom Frank Duffey10 minutes ago takes a look at the system as a whole and has strong views about what is going on there Comment +1
Lovely Michelle Cappel13 minutes ago Lovely rich wording and imagery along with good flow and rhyme. some wording sounded a little awkward to me, but very excellent none the less. Comment +1
Re: Unacceptable fate (Score: 1) by LoveLifeLen on Monday, April 21,2014 (20: 47: 47) You have expressed yourself well. Very nice! Smile
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I am unable to control And respond to the natural call