Uncertain Feelings (Senryu) Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Uncertain Feelings (Senryu)



Since you have left me
life became a real mess
uncertain feelings.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 19 September 2021

Senryu consists of 5-7-5 syllables. Thank you. Your verse in brevity is still amazingly worded.

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