Hard As Stone Poem by Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Hard As Stone

Rating: 5.0

Even now,
you try to hurt me
for a second time around
I tell you, you can't
for I have changed

The softness that I ones possessed
has dissapeared
Instead I became strong,
Ibecame hard as stone
and not easy to break

Because all the love and kindness
that I gave to you,
you have abused, and did you throw it away
As if it was carbage,
as if it meantnothing at all to you

Friday, March 6, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2020

CONGRATULATIONS being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, most deserving poem. A 10 Full Score.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 March 2020

This poem is timely, conveying the message of being hard, tough, and immune to all pains and threats like the COVID-19.. Congrats on your featured piece......10++++

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Beautiful spoken word, conveying such a message💟💟💟

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2020

Very powerfully and movingly brought forth. Thanks for sharing, Mario.

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Anil Kumar Panda 12 March 2020

Despite your effort love has been denied to you. Really it hurts a lot. Emotionally strong write. Loved it. Congrats.

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Rajnish Manga 12 March 2020

Unrequited love makes one 'Hard As Stone'. Aptly portrayed. Thanks and Congrats.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 March 2020

beautiful feelings tough in sad tone// broken loving heart broken trusted heart broken kind heart doesn't want to live in love, in trust, in kind now it becomes hard after breaking into pieces it changes its foundation so no fear of breaking no fear of misunderstanding it's best life in own path.......

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