Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken


Mathematics - Poem by Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

The old lady
looked into the mirror
multiplying and dividing her wrinkles

Topic(s) of this poem: reality, haiku


Comments about Mathematics by Mario,Lucien,Rene Odekerken

  • Britte Ninad (5/29/2018 10:29:00 PM)

    nice words-

    ...
    into the mirror
    multiplying and dividing her wrinkles

    great 10++++
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  • Akhtar Jawad (4/1/2018 9:40:00 PM)

    A nice haiku, looking at face she multiplied her winkles and cosmetics did the rest. (Report)Reply

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  • Jez Brul (3/31/2018 5:52:00 AM)

    Wow, this is such a humorous poem..A joy to read...10++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances Chan (3/21/2018 12:22:00 AM)

    Sorry Mr. Mahakul. this is no haiku, but you are absolutely right: this is a brilliant perception of hope and attitudes to calculate mathematically... talking about mathematics, a cutest brevity! I have enjoyed your prolific concise poem, subtle words weaving.... (Report)Reply

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  • Prabhata Kumar Sahoo (12/8/2017 10:36:00 PM)

    Yes, real life situations reflected nicely.Thanks. (Report)Reply

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  • (10/22/2017 4:10:00 AM)

    Self-consciousness (appearance, perception, youth and age) ! Great write, poet. (Report)Reply

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  • Ravi A (9/26/2017 9:49:00 PM)

    Very thoughtful theme for all of us. (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (9/22/2017 9:32:00 PM)

    This is amazing haiku shared with brilliant perception of hope and attitudes to calculate mathematically...10 (Report)Reply

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  • Kostas Lagos (9/14/2017 11:51:00 PM)

    First time I find mathematics so interesting! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/28/2017 8:14:00 AM)

    Clever, Mario, I like that. Barry (Report)Reply

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  • Liza Sudina (10/15/2015 2:57:00 PM)

    Funny! never had an idea of such a joke! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2015 11:06:00 PM)

    .......excellent write....astonishing imagery ★ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 27, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 26, 2017


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