Under The Weather Poem by Spock the Vegan

Under The Weather

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The flu had lasted
for two or three weeks.
Mother had me in
a bed downstairs

because my upstairs
bedroom was very
cold. She had kept
the shades drawn and
also the curtains closed.

She came into the room
and asked how I was
doing. I replied 'Mom,
I don't care if I die.'

She was startled,
and immediately opened
the curtains and put up
the shades. The morning
Sun shined in.

I saw it sparkling off
The dust particles
in the air. Within one half
hour I was up and about.

Under The Weather
Monday, November 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: coldness,depression,love,mother,self reflection ,sunshine,virus
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True story.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Margaret Alice Second 01 February 2017

Without the sun the world is such a dreary place and after about 2 days my spirits sag so much, I can't get up. When the sun shines - and the sun is another of my special friends, life is beautiful - and the sun warming us is a rare treat - to be taken little by little 'ere his grandness overcomes us.

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Spock The Vegan 01 February 2017

Two things that help us: The sun and the Son.

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Jim Franckum 02 December 2015

Of all your November poems this one is my favorite. I like how it captures the miserable feelings of a sick child.

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Spock The Vegan 31 October 2016

Thank you Jim. Sickness is no fun. I learned it again fairly recently.

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Kim Barney 30 November 2015

Your mother was very wise. Let the sunshine in, and let the healing begin!

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Spock The Vegan 31 October 2016

I agree. Now if only we had someone wise and with morals in the government.

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