Unborn (Limerick) Poem by Spock the Vegan

Unborn (Limerick)

Rating: 5.0


It was warm there in the womb
Like a soft and watery tomb
And though I was dumb
I sucked on my thumb
Until I was expelled into the cold room

Unborn (Limerick)
Wednesday, November 4, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,birth,coldness,life,limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The hospital scale was especially cold.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 September 2016

This is incredible. You have done the impossible- creating humour through a lovely this limerick poem on an unborn or just born child. I thank you, Mr Spock, for sharing such a fine masterpiece. And though I was dumb I sucked on my thumb

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Thanks a whole lot. Sometimes one comes together nicely.

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Kim Barney 05 November 2015

Did you get stuck in the wrong egg? It looks like you have a third leg! Well, that's not so bad, So don't feel too sad, You just hang it up on a peg!

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Hummm, I've read some of your limericks. This one is over the top.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 November 2015

Wonderful Limerick shared on birth and thought of fetus. Very wise sharing really...10

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Spock The Vegan 30 September 2016

Thank you veeeeeeeery much.

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