Sunday, July 1, 2018

Underneath The Blossom Tree Comments

Rating: 5.0

Underneath the blossom tree
velvet moonlight softly gleams
in crowns of fragrant majesty
through robes of raspberry beams
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Kevin Patrick
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Irfanulla Shariff 25 July 2018

Underneath the blossom tree velvet moonlight softly gleams in crowns of fragrant majesty through robes of raspberry beams ………… I admire, how the vivid imagery is portrayed in this poem. Beautifully crafted lines. It sounds musical. Thanks for sharing, Kevin. Big 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 July 2018

This magical and mystical imagery gives gleam of soft moonlight that is sprinkled with tenderness and calmness. Underneath the blossom tree flowers are beautifully scented. This poem which is excellently penned transfers the powerful essence to the readers. Your perception is of high skill. This natural poem dazzles in memory...10

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Chinedu Dike 01 July 2018

Concise, descriptive and insightful verse. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Kelvin.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 July 2018

Such a heartwarming poem, Kevin...10+++

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