Understanding Your Life's Journey..... Poem by Varsha M

Understanding Your Life's Journey.....

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Climbing up hills all through my childhood
And fathoming valleys as I steeped into adulthood
The armour of hour glass trippled within a wink
And I stood crippled, dreaming multitude in sink

How time flew under the hue of maturation seems cluless
Even though I was very cautious to capture every moments
Into the arms of master time again, I stand helpless
Bowing to its powerful magical wand that works miracles

Wearing the goggles of auspicious new experience
Lighting the aisle I have to visit oftentimes
Reaping the glorious beauty I always gave valence
Nurturing bounties which seemed difficult at times.

Take a right decision to give time to the very you
Night and day always happen but each breath special for you.

Understanding Your Life's Journey.....
Saturday, October 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
So after that poem as I brought these lines to the blank canvas, it craved to have its own identity. So I too a journey from childhood to adulthood where we need to attend to our own self at every step to keep us sound and healthy and proceed and succeed.
It's a Shakespearean sonnet with ababcdcdefefgg rhyming. My friend asked me to give breaks in between stanza so I'm doing this.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2020

thanks but you may like to review first two lines and gg

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2020

Fantastic journey, nicely written. I have a suggestion since Sonnet is of 14 lines its theme can be divided should you wish, into 7 and 7 lines each that will look appropriate. ababcdc defefgg 10*******

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