Understanding Love..

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The lady with a lamp,
Happens to camp;
Next to the farm,
In hope to calm;

All the harm,
Brain cooked as alarm;
But nothing so warm
like her love, ever swam;

Next to the lawn,
That was sown;
In hope to win
The heart of his lady, in gown.
Friday, January 15, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,love and life,love and friendship,affinity and love
Written this poem in a fraction of second just for Rhyme. Photo courtesy pinterest.
Sharad Bhatia 17 January 2021
Mind Blowing Poem. Really superb. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 January 2021
I can visualize the lovely lady with a lamp.. beautifully summed up! A wonderful love poem.
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Varsha M 17 January 2021
Sir your words inspire. Thank-you.
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Luis Estable 15 January 2021
It`s hard to see where one lines ends and another begins due to the zero punctuation. Some verses could be much better, but I can`t enter details here due to space
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Varsha M 16 January 2021
Sir thank-you so much for your comments. Yes thank-you for drawing my attention yo punctuation which is very essential for communicating right message. Thank-you sir.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler 15 January 2021
The kind of love that is the foundation of marital bliss is described in your charming poem. Beautiful!
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Varsha M 16 January 2021
Thank-you Evelyn for your beautiful comment.
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 January 2021
A fascinating poem of love. A sweet depiction of the many wonders of love.
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Varsha M 16 January 2021
Thank-you very much Rose. You always inspire.
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