The lady with a lamp,
Happens to camp;
Next to the farm,
In hope to calm;
All the harm,
Brain cooked as alarm;
But nothing so warm
like her love, ever swam;
Next to the lawn,
That was sown;
In hope to win
The heart of his lady, in gown.
I can visualize the lovely lady with a lamp.. beautifully summed up! A wonderful love poem.
It`s hard to see where one lines ends and another begins due to the zero punctuation. Some verses could be much better, but I can`t enter details here due to space
Sir thank-you so much for your comments. Yes thank-you for drawing my attention yo punctuation which is very essential for communicating right message. Thank-you sir.
The kind of love that is the foundation of marital bliss is described in your charming poem. Beautiful!
A fascinating poem of love. A sweet depiction of the many wonders of love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Mind Blowing Poem. Really superb. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful poem.