In the moment of drowsiness and indolence,
I am elevated to a new dimension,
Away to a forest, Oh so dense,
Brings a feeling of new sensation.
The smell of early morning mist,
And the smile on thy face as the moonlight breaks,
Beauty as such that none can list,
The beauty of a goddess that your smile makes.
A hallucination of nothing sweeter,
Of a girl thats you which makes my heart litter,
Love that is unexplainable,
Which I try n explain but im unable.
You are thee sun in its brightest form,
Or even the moon in midnight prom,
As you sway like the tree's as the wind winnows,
And when i look into your eyes, Oh the love that shows.
this, too, is a very pretty poem. you expressed yourself very well. keep it up
A hallucination of nothing sweeter, Of a girl thats you which makes my heart litter, Love that is unexplainable, Which I try n explain but im unable. oh, i like it
Wow I felt that poem I've written similar poems in the past. Sometimes love is so strong that words can't describe them. But you know the feeling is there. Thanks for sharing and remember. Spread Yourself! ! ! ! ~Xeniyah
Get rid of the thy in this one it dosen't fit but that's all it's a good poem Eddi
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I would like to translate this poem
Again. This sounds like something the speaker in Sweet Misery would say to their love. Awesome poem.