United We Serve Poem by Kristin Nicole RothDavis

United We Serve

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United We Serve


Personified all things become one

Evidently I find comfort in your stare

Rightly so, you replenish with a new sun

Vital information becomes intensely Aware

Intricately we unite in a swirling Motion

Respective the three of us strive Emotionally

Times are toughened by our personal Reflections

United we serve the spirit with greater Affections

Our connection willingly remains strong

Unquestioned you beckon, assuming all wrong

Significantly, we belong with you.




Copyright © 08-22-2007 Kristin Roth-Davis

Author's notes:

Double Acrostic poem written with love, I dedicate this to the two closest people in my life. Allan and Amera, without you two I wouldn't be here today. Thank you.

~Kristin~

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I find the third line in particular immensely striking. t x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 24 August 2007

Double delightful, indeed, Kris....Your natural flare for poetic eloquence & quasi-creativity is ever-impressive...Young lady, you keep that pen Poppin' & Pumpin'! So good to see you on stage tonight...Me, im just a visitor since june, though i've scribed a few new, and pulled the majority of the old... Miss ya Girl! Frankster/FjR

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