poet Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Universal Remote Control With Eternal Life

Here is your Remote
It will last forever after
You can forward and go back
it will never brake it will never fail
as for there is no turn back.

Here is your Control,
you can take it over and change your life,
You can watch the past, you can change the future
and you can ride your life in fast speed on the auto pilot,
as for if you really need to reach it fast, so time you can save.

At end you reach your final destination as for your time is set
and your destine, along with your free will, shall find and end,
Maybe the colors of the rainbow at the end of your way
So here it is, take your remote...Control!

Don’t bother asking about the future
As for you have it all here,
All you need in this
Fantastic piece
Of Remote
Control.


(August 19,2007- Inspired by the movie 'Click')

Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 19, 2007
Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 29, 2011

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Comments about Universal Remote Control With Eternal Life by Florida Angel

  • Abha Sharma (4/2/2008 2:15:00 AM)

    you can take it over and change your life,
    You can watch the past, you can change the future
    a universal thought...
    Metaphorically well said..enjoyed this one...

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  • Chris Mendros (8/19/2007 3:47:00 AM)

    i was gonna' say, 'sounds like 'Click! ', but....nice personal take. It's not as if the final word can ever be said on this subject.

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