~ UNIVERSAL US ~
Ms. Nivedita.
UK
26.09.09.
Solace
Edits
Meaningless
Minus
By
Universal Plus.
Solace
The
Omnibus
Unifies
I and me
And
Unisons
In
Universal Us.
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The Medieval scholars broke their head trying to define the word 'Universal'! The Realists went along with Plato, and claimed that these universal properties also existed like the 'Ideal Form' of Plato! The Nominalists laughed and said that the redness of apples and greeness of trees only existed in individuals objectively! Conceptualists said 'universals' existed only in the human mind, as a concept of the mental kind! This is a small extract from my History of Medieval Philosophy. Kindly find part-I, on page no.2, when you are in a mood! I LIKED YOUR DEFINITION OF THE UNIVERSAL! 10! -Raj
I do not like much editing, and the omnibus has some universality about it, It gives true solace. Share what you are inside and feel more secure. Universality has a lot to do with the faith in humanity. The more you know about others, the more you see good in them, and the more your trust in the universal soul. I saw this facet in your poem.10 from me
Swami Vivekananda, who was the first religious ambassador to India, fought through out his life for the Universal brotherhood.
I needed to get into a poetical mind to fully appreciate this piece. So much going on, but letting the words flow...universal, unison, us the alliteration drew the meaning to me. Great poem.
Universal Us, what a powerful thought and you express it with such wonderful style. Kept me think for hours of the words you wrote. I have to agree this is so philosophical. Great write!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Liked the theme of this poem. Expression is unique but fine.