~ Thunder Harp ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Thunder Harp ~

Rating: 4.9


Deep from bosom
Speaks deep
Speak awhile
Why stay far?

Goes my being
Amidst distant clouds
Into deep oblivion
Where runs
Knows who?

Thunder Harp
Spills melody
From svelte afar
Listen awhile.

Me mellowed
Burbly effusion
In empyrean heart
Beguile why but?

Do you know?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 18 July 2010

There is a thundering applause for your 'Thunder Harp' all over the world. Please keep it up.

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Ken E Hall 18 July 2010

Heavenly thunder as the harp speaks thru your heart..beguilingly beautiful... regards...going for an eye op..will return

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Ayaz Warith 23 July 2010

Dear Nivedita, I really like the calmness of the piece and I hope you will be ascending which means that you are moving and progressing toward a higher level and degree of poetry. Ayaz Warith

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Masterful write. Has a unique beauty about it! Deep speaks unto deep, deep from bosom, the heart does weep....A poem with deep content.; D

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David Beckham 27 July 2010

Goes my being Amidst distant clouds Into deep oblivion.... The deep nature of our journey in life cannot be explained, not by time, not by the number of runs we make. The drifting nature of the clouds, ..... the changing nature of man, all too constant all so familiar! True talk from the heart! ! So grateful to have a chance to share in your works.10

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Ovidd 15 May 2011

Good work poet! I liked these lines especially 'Goes my being Amidst distant clouds Into deep oblivion Where runs Knows who? '

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Miroslava Odalovic 16 October 2010

It's beautiful cloudgazing. No need for me to creep into 'knowledge at all so as to enjoy it.

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Marieta Maglas 25 August 2010

Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation..more than deserving of tens.Thank you for sharing.

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Marina Gasbey 03 August 2010

Complicated, but so simple. Your words do not hide the truth, only promote it. What is inside. Thanks for sharing.... Marina Gasbey...

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Vinod Kumar 02 August 2010

Nice reflection of the mind beyond the Nirvana there should be some understanding,10+

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