~unrequited~ Poem by Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun

~unrequited~



Come as nerve,
edgy,
controlled reserve...
Imploded veins
redden the page,
Selfless release
saturated rage.
Consuming,
overflowing...the pain,
Stamina growing
my heart beats
your name.

2-4-06

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina Onyemaechi 04 February 2006

Your brief lines here, Kim, come alive through the richness of the language. I'll confess to not fully understanding all the images here, but I don't care! ! I like the way they look and sound! ! ! Kind regards, Gina.

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