Unsatisfied Poem by Melanie Emikohe

Unsatisfied

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It feels like pain, it might be love,
punching the heart with holes
to breathe but too small to satisfy.

I lick a taste of it but scarce;
gasping for more to fill the space,
to get ecstatic, wild, intoxicated.

I weep before it gets to climax;
the road's too clueless to follow
that I eventually surrender.

To the hell with Love or Pain,
to cold hearts that hesitate,
too standard to override a moment

or too cocksure that one's heart
is infinitely patient, like the current
that always follows the stream.

Saturday, September 16, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: clueless
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vincent Levine 23 July 2018

Wow! Great poem. Is it pain or is it love? There is a fine line, but it has to be drawn... to get ecstatic, wild, intoxicated. That is the goal-

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Melanie Emiko 23 July 2018

True. Thank you.

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Prasanna Kumari 16 September 2006

i feel the agony and ecstasy of pain in your poem

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